Succinctly Yours: Microfiction

Harold considered the many comments made to him. Grabbing a hand mirror, he agreed that even at a right angle, he is a most handsome man.

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Anonymous said...

Gotta love a fellow Narcssis.

Jim said...

Hey Pooch ~~ I love it! So far the best µ-fiction story I have read. Even though mine was Holmes related (which you read, thank you)
I was really glad to find your innovative posting. It was refreshing.

Sharkbytes (TM) said...

You saw the mirror too. (I didn't but a few people did). He does seem to have that smug look.

Anyes said...

Such modesty, how lovely ;-)

Kay L. Davies said...

Both humility and poise—oops, I mean pose.
Most of us thought it was a magnifying glass, good for you to see it as a mirror.
— K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

Pat said...

Hilarious! Yes, he does sound like a narcissist. I called the guy Harold, too...he just looks like a Harold, doesn't he? It's interesting to see who thought it was a mirror and who thought it was a magnifying glass.

Susan Fobes said...

I sort of went in the same direction. Good one!

Grandma's Goulash said...

The back side stuck out for me. Yeah, pun intended. Glad to see some focus on his face. Enjoyed your mf a lot.

My SY: Questionable