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11/08/2010

Microfiction Monday #56

 And I,

I followed the path less traveled

and got lost

and cried for my mommy.

She was never there.









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9 comments:

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Thanks for the chuckle and Robert Frost nod. Enjoyed it!

septembermom said...

Oh, so sad. Much emotion here in these few characters. Well done.

hope said...

That's why on the road less traveled, it's always good to have a companion. :)

faith said...

Aw, I can relate - I'm always getting lost! :)

Diane said...

Seems sad to me..... :O(

evenstarwen said...

Oh, poor little girl. I love that poem, and I love how you used it, Well done.

Nessa said...

Sometimes that happens when you follow a different path.

sylviamorice said...

I enjoyed the Robert Frost reference, but feel very sad for the little one...who doesn't need mommies at times like this...
Have a great week. Cheers!

fiction-books said...

Hi Pooch,

Some great lines that told a real story, but ssoooo sad. Made me want to rush into the picture and take her hand.

Yvonne