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8/07/2011

Succinctly Yours ~ Week 20

Using the photo as inspiration, write a story of 140 characters or 140 words. It doesn’t have to be exactly 140, just not more.The added optional challenge is to use the word of the week in the story. Then post it here.


 
Alice was oblivious to Bobo studying her more subtle make-up.
"I should dial my style back a bit," he decided.

10 comments:

Helen said...

Oh Bobo might learn a thing or two about makeup it seems! haha

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Helen said...

It seems like Bobo might learn a thing or two about makeup! ha ha

anthonynorth said...

He should indeed. Nice one.

Grandma's Goulash said...

He does appear to be studying something. I'd never considered that it might be her makeup. Fun mf.

storytreasury said...

That's probably a good idea.

Pat said...

Yeah, the egg on his face is a bit over the top. Thanks for the laugh!

Jim said...

A clever read you had, Pooch.
Shucks, after a day of watching this guy I was kind of getting to liking him. I hope he doesn't change too much.
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Susan Fobes said...

He sort of is "out there!" Good one.

Akelamalu said...

His makeup is definitely not subtle! LOL

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Well, Bobo has taken that first important step: he admitted he has a problem! :)