Succinctly Yours: Week 10

Five trees in a row near a glistening street

Tower over lovers as they meet.

Join me dear

We will ride

And fly to love's beat.
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Anyes said...

What a program ;-)

Kay L. Davies said...

Wonderful! I never would have thought of the rider being the same age as the woman with the shopping bag! Good for you.
— K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

Lynette Killam said...

A poetic and unique take on the prompt...well done!

Grandma's Goulash said...

Very observant - those trees are really lined up. Your take is unique - the first I've seen that pictures these two as lovers. Wonderful!

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Pat said...

This is completely different from all the other SYs this week--the two people as lovers. I like the poetry of it and also the mention of 5 trees. I hadn't even noticed them. Wonderful microfiction!